No… it was supposed to be implied that when she and Glitch went around the back of the warehouse that she ended up close enough for him to grab her… but apparently that didn’t end up clear. XD I’m sorry! These last few pages might be a little more awkward than I intended… it does get better in the next chapter, i promise. :S
I think we all do hiccups in comics XD I’d say what would fix it is in the 4th panel, have Pumkin’s head sticking out slightly from behind the shelving.
Well, this is one way to speed up one’s funeral. Pumpkin is NOT someone to put in that ‘damsel in distress’ position without causing a fatal resentment.
Don’t worry Glitch–mistress probably won’t make you clean the mess…
So wait… EVERYONE was in on it?
Well, a couple managers at the factory and the single officer stationed on the station, yes. X3 Hahah~ I think I failed at writing this section!
Glitch bout to cut a bitch up in hea
he’s not going to be happy for sure!
Looks pretty good but it’s confusing how he suddenly grabbed pumkin from no where. Will it be explained in the next page or something?
No… it was supposed to be implied that when she and Glitch went around the back of the warehouse that she ended up close enough for him to grab her… but apparently that didn’t end up clear. XD I’m sorry! These last few pages might be a little more awkward than I intended… it does get better in the next chapter, i promise. :S
I think we all do hiccups in comics XD I’d say what would fix it is in the 4th panel, have Pumkin’s head sticking out slightly from behind the shelving.
Well, this is one way to speed up one’s funeral. Pumpkin is NOT someone to put in that ‘damsel in distress’ position without causing a fatal resentment.
Don’t worry Glitch–mistress probably won’t make you clean the mess…
Naw, I just got confused is all.
So sorry for the late reply! I’ve been busy!